The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.

The line chart demonstrates the average temperatures in

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days in two cities in New Zealand,

Auckland

and

Christchurch

, and

London

and

Edinburgh

city which are located in the United Kingdom.

Overall

, what stands out from the graph is that climate changes

the

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same in both

Auckland

and

Christchurch

, which are exactly

in contrast

with

London

and

Edinburgh

's changing trend. As can be seen, focusing on

Auckland

and

Christchurch

,

in

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the beginning of each year and

at the end

of the year they peak at around 24 and 22

degrees

Celsius respectively.

However

, in July and August they witness a sharp fall, the

counts

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for

Auckland

is 15 and for

Christchurch

is around 10

degrees

.

Also

evident is,

London

and

Edinburgh

start with about 6

degrees

in January. After which

London

and

Edinburgh

soar in July and August,

Thus

, The figures for the former

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around 23

degrees

and for the latter is 17. Another

intresting

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fact is that for the rest of the

year

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year,

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they both decline significantly to

appromixely

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approximately

7

degrees

Celsius.