As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagre.

Many people feel that
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learning
foreign
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language is a waste of
time
to
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. I completely disagree with
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satisfaction is much more important than computer
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, the right computer will translater all the information accurately, but not always, the computer is big and it will be inconvenient to carry it with you all the
time
. So I think it is better to learn foreign
languages
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for
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you
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to
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or for some business you
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but you do not know Korean, there are several disadvantages of
this
, but you can not communicate properly with
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and
that is
too bad
therefore
our understanding that learning
languages
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a waste of
time
is completely wrong because when you learn the
languages
of a country, you
also
learn the history of it is culture, which helps us to increase our knowledge and think
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. If you want to go
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a trip learn the language and culture of that country and you will have a good
time
there .
On the other hand
, there are
also
disadvantages of learning too many
languages
, it can be stressful in some cases. To
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you
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start learning several
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the
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some
time
, it will definitely be ineffective because you will not be able to learn all of them at
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some
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time
it is not possible,
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if you are learning several
languages
they will be
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you won't remember the words or they will
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with each other and it will be ineffective so you take one or two
languages
and learn them at the beginning level and
them
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other
languages
you can not
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. In conclusion, knowing
languages
is great I personally love learning
languages
and I am two learning English and Korean.
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