It is important for childrento learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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educating the
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levels, checks, and
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I know a kid who lives near my house he is seven years old. He gets all these
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getting all these
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he got both
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mentally
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receiving
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mentally ill and
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for several months.
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is
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well now but he still
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a lot of
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because of the
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a level they should
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the pressure. The UN and WHO
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and kids
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punishments
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are necessary,
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it
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should be under control
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standards. If any
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punishment
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physical
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it will change the complete behaviour of that child, It will provide them and us
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neverending problem. Any
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should not cross the limits
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these measurements. We can use the
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complete solution for the problem.
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