You are starting a new business and need to build a website. You have a friend who works for an IT company who you want to help you. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter •describe your new business •ask your friend to help you build the website •say how you will thank your friend for his/her help.
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my dear friend.
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grateful
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Task Achievement
To improve your task response score, ensure that you address all parts of the prompt fully. While you described your new business and asked for help, including more specific details about your business and how exactly your friend's skills can assist would strengthen your letter. For thanking your friend, consider adding specifics about your gratitude method, such as offering a meal, providing a service in return, or a thoughtful gift.
Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, focus on organizing your thoughts more clearly. Begin with a proper introduction, then discuss each point from the prompt in separate paragraphs, and conclude with a summary or final request. Use transition words to connect your ideas smoothly and check the flow from one paragraph to another.
Coherence and Cohesion
Review and correct spelling and grammar errors to enhance readability and professionalism. Using correct punctuation, capitalization, and spelling helps convey your message clearly. Consider using tools or asking for feedback to catch errors you might overlook.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,