Some people think that men and women have different qualities,therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

All

the

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apply

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people

are have

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have

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different

quality

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qualities

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so

that

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apply

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some

jobs

that

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apply

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are more suitable for

women

and some for

men

.I disagree with that opinion and I will highlight the reason why in the following essay.

Firstly

,all

the

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people

are have

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have

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opportunities to do

the

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apply

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job

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jobs

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involve it for

men

or

women

.

In other words

,they should be received

the

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apply

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equal

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equally

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like

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by

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others.

For example

,some people think

teacher

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teachers

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always

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are always

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for

female

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females

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but not true,two genders can teach and look after

for

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apply

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children.

This

will lead to various

ecperience

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experience

experiences

and create new

emotion

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emotions

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or

experiment

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experiments

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for the child.

Secondly

,

in

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apply

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the world

have

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has

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many

jobs

for

women

and

men

do

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to do

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together.

This

means the chance not just for ladies but for

gentlements

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gentlemen

too.

For instance

is

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apply

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doctor

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doctors

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,

men

are not patient and care about the

child

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children

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like

women

do,so that

job

need

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requires

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men

to be strict in mental health and

women

have responsibilities to look after and reduce the

feeling

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feelings

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of

child

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the child

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.

However

,there are some

jobs

men

can do better than

women

.Because there are some works

need

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that need

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strong

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strength

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so that

women

can do

not

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apply

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better than

men

.

Like carry

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For carrying

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the

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apply

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heavy

thing

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things

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,

men

can do

easy

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easily

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than

women

because they have health better than female.

This

will be true but just in

physically

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physical

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health,except

it

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apply

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women

can do the same

jobs

with

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as

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men

. In conclusion,

men

and

women

should

be received

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receive

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the same

job

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jobs

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and take the same equal.

This

is because all the genders can do the same

job

and

very

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are very

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good.So we must cancel the idea that certain

jobs

are suitable with

men

and others for

women

.