Some people think that men and women have differrnt qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that

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and men have their own unique characteristics, so there are many specific

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that

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for

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each

gender. The writer would partly disagree with

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statement

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several reasons which will be explained

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essay. Many people argue that

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are belonged

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to the weak sides of society,

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they should apply for office

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to become

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white-collar

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workers

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. Indeed, the majority of

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now are working in many large companies

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as Apple or Samsung, where they can earn money

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than their

counterpart

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counterparts

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.

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,

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have more strength than

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, who will be responsible for heavy

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, since the percentage of

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some risks related to heavy things can be reduced significantly.

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, some individuals say that

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should stay at home, and do the housework

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of going out and doing the same job as male workers.

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, I have

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opposite thought with

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opinion because

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now are very intelligent, strong, and

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, so they can easily make money by themselves.

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, it is important to think that

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have their own thoughts,

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physical health as men, and ingenuity,

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there are a variety

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jobs

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of jobs

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that are suitable for them. Take an example, in Vietnam, many single mothers have to work have to work in factories, where need

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strong health to complete these tasks. Indeed,

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their poor living conditions, the majority of female workers have to work in manufacturers.

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, nowadays, there are many

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, who are responsible for many high

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as the CEO or

presidents

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of many large businesses in the world.

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, despite the different qualities between men and

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, there are still many

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that suit

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both sexes, recently.

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, female workers

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for heavy and light

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is a common belief, which

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more on their background,

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and their

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conditions. In conclusion, certain

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are suitable for each person is a common thought in recent

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.

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, I would argue that people can choose their own

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which depend on their condition and

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their health.