The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give detailed information about how many percentages of
productions
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will be projected by different sectors from 2040 to 2060.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there will be
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little change
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all categories over the period.
Moreover
, it is
also
worth noting that services will be the most dominant in all years. In detail, it can be seen that services and manufacturing will show 40% and 31% in 2040 respectively.
Besides
that, in 2040, the rate of info-com tech will represent 15%,
however
, other sections, namely materials, agriculture, and energy will be lower from 7% in 2040.
In contrast
, it is predicted
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services and manufacturing
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2 % than before. As regards info-com tech will
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up to 16% and there is expected to be little difference in the proportion of production.
Furthermore
,
this
figure for materials will climb to 4% in 2060.
Last
but not least, both trends energy and agriculture will drop to (5% and 1%)
at the end
of the period
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