The chart below shows what Antropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows what Antropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The condition of anthropology alumni after completing their bachelor's degree is delineated
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two visuals.
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their types of activities are portrayed in the pie chart with different colours and patterns.
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the details about the graduates' stipend are placed in a table. In general, there are four options that the students can take after finishing their major. Taking a job, continuing their study, doing both simultaneously, or staying unemployed. Whenever someone is working after 5 years in the freelance, public, or private areas, their salaries can vary from $25,000 and four times higher. From the chart, full-time work is the most chosen life path, more than one-half opt for
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. One-third compared to that, they choose to do a part-time job.
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of having their time in labour, 8% prefer to continue the postgrad study full-time.
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, 3% lower proves that some still want to be employed and be a student at the same time. The rest is neither unemployed nor unknown. Turning to the next visual, it is evident that 50% of the graduates can reach the highest stipend, which makes the government sector come on top. Followed by 10% lower as a freelance consultant. In the
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place, private companies are only occupied with 30% of anthropologists.
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