charts about the comparison of the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. Describe it.
Depicted in the charts are
data
about the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The data
was first illustrated in the table, which shows where the money came from, and then
the charts below it
show how it was distributed. The sources of money were divided into 3 groups, which were national government, local taxes, and other sources.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
, it can be observed that the largest contributor for
the police budget was the national government, contributing more than 175m in 2017 and slightly higher in 2018. Change preposition
to
On the other hand
, the smallest contributor went to other sources with 38m in 2017 and 38,5m in 2018. Furthermore
, the comparison between the total budget received by the police experienced an increase, where they received a total of 304.7m in 2017 and approximately 318.6m in 2018.
Another noteworthy aspect were
the pie charts that Change the verb form
was
informs
Verb problem
provide
data
about how the money was spent in 2 years. The data
was categorized into 3 groups, which were salaries, technology, and building and transport. In both year
, the highest spending went to salaries, and the lowest spending went to technology.Change to a plural noun
years
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