The bar chart below gives information about thenumber of studnets studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012
The bar graph compares the proportion of local and foreign
students
of an
UK computer science university within a three-year period from 2010 to 20012.
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Overall
, the vast majority of the students
were home students
throughout the whole period. Moreover
, the highest number of students
ocurred
after 2011.
In 2010, the Correct your spelling
occurred
amount
of local male and females
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female
students
was more dominant compered
with international Correct your spelling
compared
students
at approximately 40 and 35 respectively while
international men and women numbers were under 20. Moving on, by 2011, the amount
of citizens and foreign men was almost the same at arouns
24. Correct your spelling
around
However
, in the women
section the Change noun form
women's
amount
of home females was drastically over the international's Change the quantifier
number
student
at over 40. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Finally
, 2012 was the year the university witnessed the gratest
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greatest
amont
of home and international men Correct your spelling
amount
students
, both were over 35. On the other hand
, women students
from foreign nations did not show a significant amount
at 20 in comparison with local students
, which reached the highest amount
of all the period, at 45.Submitted by jasielglz40 on
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