Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

part of the society believes that foreigners should obey and adhere to local

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and conduct

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others believe, that

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should accept other cultural

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.In my opinion, adherence to local traditions creates unnecessary stress on foreign

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and makes the visit less enjoyable,

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acceptance of other

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individual practises will lead locals to explore new things and attract

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in other traditions to improve local culture

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uplifting the

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level of tourism in the nation.

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, in my conviction local citizens should always accept , overseas

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' behaviour and

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. To commence,locally developed traditional beliefs can create stressful conditions for foreigners and that can affect the success and the enjoyable nature of the visit.People most of the time schedule their foreign tours to have a free and relaxing time in from their busy

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if they have to be under strict traditional

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that relaxed mentality would not be with the visitors.

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, in

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Saudi

Arabia women are strictly prohibited from loose clothes in some places ,

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having a very hot climate outsiders are forced to wear heavy clothing to

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prevent

unessaccery troubles,

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making the

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a less enjoyable and stressful situation.

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is clearly defined that adherence to strict cultural

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in a host

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can make the trip useless and unenjoyable to the

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.

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, if you allow overseas individuals to show and express their normal

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, locals can learn many from that and

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outsiders will enjoy their trip a lot. Eventually ,

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of the day, they will love to visit the place again, boosting the foreign revenue.

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, in

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there are a lot of different cultural restaurants catering for a vast variety of different ethnicities, and

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practice in most of the other places in the

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they earn a lot from tourism.

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, I believe acceptance of other cultures is very important to the local

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. In conclusion,

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acceptance of

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normal behaviours and traditions will lead to making them under stress during their travel

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allowing them to express their selves in

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nation will make them happier and appeals to them to come to that

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again. As

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,

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writer has in strong notion that the host

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should welcome cultural differences.