The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different veriables are measured in percentages

The graph depicts demographic trends in percentages which

consists

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of three different categories

such

as

birth

rate

, population growth

rate

and death

rate

in Scotland during 80 years.

Overall

, all the trends had a significant decline.

Birth

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rate

had

a

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the

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highest

rate

,

while

the population growth

rate

got the opposite in 1940 Looking in more detail, the public growth

rate

was the lowest

rate

in 1940 approximately just under 1 %.

Then

, many women

birth

in 1940 at 2,5%

while

the

ratio

of death had a level at 1,5%.

However

, in 1955 the

ratio

of fertility decreased gradually by

half

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percent

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per cent

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,

while

fatality

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the fatality

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rate

declined substantially

at

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around 0,5

percent

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per cent

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.

Additionally

, the population

dense

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density

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in Scotland increased

abd

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and

surpassed the fatality

rate

about

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of about

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1,2

percent

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per cent

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. Demographic trends in 2000 looked different

due to

lots of reduction in all variables.

For instance

, the

ratio

of

fertality

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fertility

fatality

dropped dramatically well under 1%,

whereas

the mortality

rate

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remained stable

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just

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under half

percent

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per cent

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and the public dense

rate

went down to nearly 0%.

Last

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in 2020, the

ratio

of mortality exceeded the

ratio

of

birth

.