The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per person of 11.5 litres.
the given table compares the
least
Correct word choice
lowest
cost
of water
per person in five countries
, and the average proportion of their income
which is spent on water
.
overall
, it is clear that
the cost
of water
in developing countries
are
much higher than Change the verb form
is
developed
ones.
To commence, in developing Change preposition
in developed
countries
, individuals have to spent
more money on Change the verb
spend
water
. In Tanzania, the daily cost
of water
for a person is 6.4 dollars, which is 5.7% of their average daily income
. The second and the third pricy water
is in Uganda and Pakistan, where a person have
to pay 4.1 and 1.7 dollars for 11.5 litres of Change the verb form
has
water
every day, respectively.
On the other hand
, in developed countries
the average Add a comma
countries,
cost
of water
are
cheaper than Change the verb form
is
developing
ones. Change preposition
in developing
Also
, duo
to higher Correct your spelling
due
income
, an individual pay
much Correct subject-verb agreement
pays
lesser
of his Correct word choice
less
income
for water
. In the UK, the price of 11.5 litres of water
is 1.3 USD as just 0.013% of his income
. Similiarly
, an Correct your spelling
Similarly
american
Change the capitalization
American
pay
0.85 cents of us dollars as the Correct subject-verb agreement
pays
least
price among all Correct word choice
lowest
countries
with a negligible amount of his income
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cost, water, countries, income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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