The chart bellow shows the percentage of car trips by purpose and genders in 2015.
The diagram identifies the proportion of car journeys
those
are used by male and Correct pronoun usage
that
females
drivers Change the noun form
female
according to
the reason and sex in 2005.
Overall
, the statistics indicated those the majority of men
applied for car trips for work and recreation. in contrast
, the women
recycled motors for shopping, visiting friends, courses and banks.
Look in detail , approximately 52% of autos are used by men
for working compared to 38% which are used by women
. In addition
, the number of men
who applied for vehicle recreation is huge for women
. On the other hand
, more women
recycled motors into courses , visited friends, shopped and ran errands compared to men
. However
, this
is a normal result because females are more active in social issues than malesSubmitted by mohammedelhassan811 on
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