The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The given representation indicates the percentage of people who settled permanently and … through 83 years. At first glance, is evident that as the number of rental accommodations
have
decreased, the figure of house owners Correct subject-verb agreement
has
have
increased. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
moreover
what stands out is the equal amount of each in 1971.
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first,
according to
the chart in 1918 rental houses reached a peak at more than 75%. Since that year, it has witnessed a steady decrease in figures until 2001 by approximately 35% and stood at more than 30%. Opposed to this
overall
trend, this
type of accommodation has seen an increase in numbers at
2011 by about over 5% rather than Change preposition
in
2001
.
Regarding the house owners percentages, since 1918, it has undergone a gradual growth from roughly 20% to Change preposition
in 2001
the
slightly under 70% in 2001. Unlike Correct article usage
apply
this
general growth the sum of householders have
experienced a Unnecessary verb
apply
margine
drop Correct your spelling
marginal
margin
by
around 5% Change preposition
of
at
2011.Change preposition
in
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