The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The given representation indicates the percentage of people who settled permanently and … through 83 years. At first glance, is evident that as the number of rental accommodations
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decreased, the figure of house owners
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increased.
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what stands out is the equal amount of each in 1971.
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first,
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the chart in 1918 rental houses reached a peak at more than 75%. Since that year, it has witnessed a steady decrease in figures until 2001 by approximately 35% and stood at more than 30%. Opposed to
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overall
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trend,
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type of accommodation has seen an increase in numbers
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2011 by about over 5% rather than
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. Regarding the house owners percentages, since 1918, it has undergone a gradual growth from roughly 20% to
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slightly under 70% in 2001. Unlike
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general growth the sum of householders
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experienced a
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marginal
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around 5%
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2011.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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