The bar chart below shows the percentage of Austraian men and women in different age group who did regular physical activity in 2009.
The bar graph compares the proportion of
men
and women
of different ages who lived in Australia and exercised regularly in 2009.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that generally
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generally,
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higher among Change the verb form
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women
in comparison with men
in the studied year.
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seen,
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44-year-old
men
and wemon
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former
was 39.5% Correct article usage
the former
while
the latter was 52.5%. On the other hand
, men
and women
who are 65 years old and over participated almost equally in physical exercises at 46.7% and 46.7% respectively.
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evident
evidence
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age bracket that Change the adverb
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men
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women
were
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men
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those aged
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