occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter • give details of your visit to the restaurant • explain the reason for the celebration • say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to express my
thank
for the exceptional experience Fix the agreement mistake
thanks
i
and my family had at your Change the capitalization
I
restaurant
last
night. We visit
your Wrong verb form
visited
restaurant
to celebrate my wife’s birthday,and i
must say that we were happy with both the food and the service.
When we arrived,we were greeted warmly by your staff. And Change the capitalization
I
also
your staff showed a beautifully set table.The atmosphere was elegant.
If we say about food.Every dish we ordered was bursing
with Correct your spelling
bursting
flavor
. Change the spelling
flavour
Menu
had Add an article
The menu
a
all Correct article usage
apply
typ
of foods,and everyone Correct your spelling
types
foun
Correct your spelling
found
own
taste Correct pronoun usage
their own
food
.We were satisfied with your menu.
Change preposition
in food
Furthermore
,I want to say thank your team for their perfect service.
Overall
,our visit to your restaurant
give
Change the verb form
gives
to
my family Change preposition
apply
memorable
impression.We will certainly be returning in the future and we will be recommending your Correct article usage
a memorable
restaurant
to our friends.
Thank you once again for making my wife’s birthday celebration truly unforgettable.
Yours faithful
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Coherence, Cohesion, and Grammar
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Task Achievement
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Writing Tone
For a more personalized touch, consider directly addressing a specific restaurant manager if the name is known, instead of a generic opening.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,