occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter • give details of your visit to the restaurant • explain the reason for the celebration • say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my
thank
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for the exceptional experience
i
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and my family had at your
restaurant
last
night. We
visit
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your
restaurant
to celebrate my wife’s birthday,and
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must say that we were happy with both the food and the service. When we arrived,we were greeted warmly by your staff. And
also
your staff showed a beautifully set table.The atmosphere was elegant. If we say about food.Every dish we ordered was
bursing
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bursting
with
flavor
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.
Menu
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had
a
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apply
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all
typ
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types
of foods,and everyone
foun
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found
own
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their own
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taste
food
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.We were satisfied with your menu.
Furthermore
,I want to say thank your team for their perfect service.
Overall
,our visit to your
restaurant
give
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to
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my family
memorable
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a memorable
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impression.We will certainly be returning in the future and we will be recommending your
restaurant
to our friends. Thank you once again for making my wife’s birthday celebration truly unforgettable. Yours faithful Akbarshoh
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Coherence, Cohesion, and Grammar
Try to include varied sentence structures and use more complex grammar forms to elevate the writing style.
Task Achievement
To enhance task achievement, ensure to cover all parts of the prompt in detail. While you have touched on every aspect, expanding slightly more on each could add depth to your letter.
Writing Tone
For a more personalized touch, consider directly addressing a specific restaurant manager if the name is known, instead of a generic opening.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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