Write a letter to a bookstore manager who is living in another city. Ask him/ her to make available a book that you are interested in. In you letter. - What book you are looking for? - Why you need this book. - How you plan to purchase the book.
Dear Sir ,
I am writing
this
to inform you that I want to purchase a book
which is available at your store only.
I am looking for Cambridge IELTS edition 2024 . I checked out all the libraries and bookstores in my area but these stores do not have the latest edition of this
book
.
I want to purchase this
book
so that I can prepare for my IELTS exam , which will be coming at the end
of this
month . This
book
has the latest samples as well as
tips to improve writing . Moreover
, this
book
includes helpful notes for reading and speaking .
Nowadays, most of the students are preparing for this
exam ,therefore
, looking for the same edition. However
, this
book
is not available in my city . Therefore
, I will buy this
book
from your website and pick it up from your store on Monday evening , after my work . I would really appreciate it if you please keep my book
on the reserved side so that the staff members will not give it to another person. If you have any questions please reply to this
mail.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Roopkamal Kaur.Submitted by kmlchahal97 on
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coherence cohesion
Try to provide more logical connections between paragraphs and ideas to enhance the flow of your letter.
coherence cohesion
Breaking down longer paragraphs into smaller ones focused on a single idea can improve clarity.
task achievement
Although you have addressed all parts of the task, a bit more detail in some areas, like specific features you are looking for in the book, would further strengthen your response.
task achievement
A slightly more formal tone would be more suitable for a letter to a store manager, for instance, by avoiding contractions or colloquial expressions.
task achievement
You have successfully addressed all parts of the task, providing a clear reason for needing the book and how you plan to purchase it.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriately polite and formal, fitting well with the context of the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite