The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  Write at least 150 words.   (20 mins.)
The graph
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explains
the pollution in the UK by various sources from 1990 to 2005. With regard to transport,
air
pollutants
followed slight fluctuations in the given period. In terms of industry,
air
chemicals suffered a downward trend starting from just below 6
million
tons in 1990 and
reached to
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reaching
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3
million
tones
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tons
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in 1996 before declining exponentially to 2
million
tones
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tons
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in the year 2005. In 1990,
total
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the total
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air
pollutants
contribution was 7
million
tons and
then
it experienced a continuous decline to 4
million
tones
in 1999 and remained steady till 2002. Later, it experienced a fall to 3
million
tones
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tonnes
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in 2005. As
of
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for
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households,
air
contaminants
were oscillating
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oscillated
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from 1
million
tones
to 0.05
million
tones
in the given period.
Overall
, total
air
pollutants
and industry were seen following a declining trend in terms of their contribution to
air
pollution,
while
house holds
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households
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nad
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and
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transport were the least to release
air
pollutants
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, million, tones with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Emissions
  • Air quality
  • Pollutants
  • Contributing factors
  • Industrial processes
  • Transport sector
  • Household energy
  • Agricultural activities
  • Percentage change
  • Decade
  • Reduction
  • Increase
  • Significantly
  • Fluctuations
  • Trends
  • Sustainable practices
  • Environmental policy
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