In
this
contemporary era, some individuals are said that the person who
are ownsChange the verb form
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properties and
theyCorrect pronoun usage
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lifestyle and moment can
assessedChange the verb form
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how much
theirReplace the word
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successful.
In contrast
, traditional perspectives
such
as
, politeness and gratitude are not paramount like
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thatCorrect determiner usage
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past. In my standpoint,
iChange the capitalization
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do not agree with
this
point of view.
While
,Remove the comma
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is good personalities are the main factor to
be getChange the verb form
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esteemed in the society.
On the one hand,
people
said that the financial how much they
earnsChange the verb form
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and what they
ownsChange the verb form
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such
as houses, cars and planes
which Correct pronoun usage
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meanCorrect subject-verb agreement
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they achieve the respect
fromChange preposition
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the community.
TheseChange the determiner
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mentality is completely wrong because
of Change preposition
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theCorrect article usage
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person who
haveChange the verb form
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no sympathy and
patheticCorrect article usage
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mindset can not take
the Correct article usage
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long termAdd a hyphen
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successfulReplace the word
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while
the achievement is
on
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honour and trust.
For example
, dishonour
people
can't get the trustworthy by the clients and
consumerFix the agreement mistake
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, which
meanCorrect subject-verb agreement
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not
the Remove the article
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all things can bought with money
such
as
goodCorrect article usage
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personality.
On the other hand
, some conventional values
is deserveChange the verb form
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to
cherishWrong verb form
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and
shareWrong verb form
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toChange preposition
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ourChange the word
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next generations. Because it is
aChange the article
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inestimable ability to
survivalReplace the word
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in
this
worsenWrong verb form
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world.
However
, in
this
new
a lot of immoral and inpolite
people
are
ruinWrong verb form
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outCorrect your spelling
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world
thus
parents and
educationReplace the word
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institutionFix the agreement mistake
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have to take
responsibilitiesFix the agreement mistake
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toChange preposition
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deliveryReplace the word
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the Correct article usage
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knowledge about
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ethical mental development.
Consequently
, can
leadsWrong verb form
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offspring
haveFix the infinitive
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awareness about
the Correct article usage
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humanity
howCorrect word choice
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to be a decent
personFix the agreement mistake
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to
contributionReplace the word
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to
the Correct article usage
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society.
In conclusion,
richCorrect article usage
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and
ownWrong verb form
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properties are not the main
perspectiveFix the agreement mistake
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to get worship from the
people
since the world
is needChange the verb form
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the Correct article usage
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people
hadChange the verb form
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good
personalityFix the agreement mistake
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rather than just
wealthyAdd a missing verb
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in materials.