The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age between 1.4 million years ago and 0.8 million years ago. The figure shows how the period of the
Stong
Age. Correct your spelling
Stone
Overall
, it can be seen that the Stone Age of Tool
A and Tool
B
both difference changed over time.
Looking at the figures, it can be seen that the structure in the front view
of tool
A is quite slim. Meanwhile, the features in the front view
of tool
B
are quite larger than those in the front view
of tool
A. In addition
, the side view
of both tools A and B
found that the side view
B
has
slim when Verb problem
was
which
compared with the side Correct pronoun usage
apply
view
tool
A. Next to the back view
found that the back view
of tool
B
has
bigger Verb problem
is
more
than Correct quantifier usage
apply
tool
A. when
comparing allow 5 cm. Capitalize word
When
Finally
, compared about
the colours of both found that Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
tool
A a grey colours and the
Correct article usage
apply
tool
B
a
light grey colour.Add a missing verb
is a
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