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The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age between 1.4 million years ago and 0.8 million years ago. The figure shows how the period of the
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 Age.
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, it can be seen that the Stone Age of
Tool
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 A and
Tool
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B
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 both difference changed over time. Looking at the figures, it can be seen that the structure in the front
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 of
tool
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 A is quite slim. Meanwhile, the features in the front
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 of
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 are quite larger than those in the front
view
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 of
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, the side
view
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 of both tools A and
B
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 found that the side
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has
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 slim when
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compared with the side
view
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tool
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 A. Next to the back
view
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 found that the back
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 of
tool
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B
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has
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 bigger
more
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than
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when
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 comparing allow 5 cm.
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, compared
about
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the colours of both found that
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tool
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 A a grey colours and
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B
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light grey colour.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tool, b, view with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Stone Age
  • tools
  • cutting
  • development
  • rudimentary
  • sophisticated
  • progression
  • unworked pebbles
  • flake tools
  • bifacial tools
  • efficiency
  • materials
  • emergence
  • characteristics
  • functionality
  • craftsmanship
  • precision
  • hunting
  • carving
  • advancements
  • significance
  • human development
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