Nowadays, teenagers used to play violent
games
. Some people consider that
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trend
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them to commit crimes
as well as
mimic
which they
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in
games
. In my opinion, these
sortFix the agreement mistake
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of violent
games
can
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crimeCorrect article usage
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rate
toChange preposition
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children in the majority of cities,
however
,
this
is not enough to determine the reasons
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ofChange preposition
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teenagers.
To begin
with, playing violent
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is clearly one of the reasons
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misbehaviour. They not only shoot other players by using
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guns but
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to stab others.
Due to
their prematual mindset which
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not fully
settedCorrect your spelling
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molar concept, they tend to confuse real life and
artificialCorrect article usage
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world and
this
confusion
makeChange the verb form
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teenagers have
aChange the article
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interest and motivation to do what they
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in the
games
in reality.
For example
, in New
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, a few
of Change preposition
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students have an experience
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threatAdd an article
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of
fromChange preposition
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their
.
While
there are a lot of reasons
aboutChange preposition
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teenager's
misconductsFix the agreement mistake
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, one of the biggest
reasonFix the agreement mistake
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is parent's indifference. The juveniles are becoming adult by educating
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their parents.
However
, in
society, parents are busy
to workChange the verb form
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and it means that their children are neglected in their
houseCorrect your spelling
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.
Moreover
,
this
social phenomenon makes children
to Change the verb form
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play violent
games
without
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care, which
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mentioned in
secondChange the article
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.
In
, it is obvious that playing violent
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affects increasing
rateCorrect article usage
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of juvenile crime,
however
, parent's indifference
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more highly contributed to
this
kind of
crimesFix the agreement mistake
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.