The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Looking at the bar chart , a piece of information about
male's
and female'sChange noun form
males
involvment
in Correct your spelling
involvement
education
process in Add an article
the education
Britan
can be observed. The statistics Correct your spelling
Britain
shows
three different time frames and the difference between Change the verb form
show
number
of people who Change the article
a number
the number
prefered
part-time or full-time education.
Correct your spelling
preferred
To begin
with, the fact that full-time education was rarely elected by people in comparison with part-time ,is quite noticeable. For example
,in 1970/71 1000 thousand
men was
involved in part-time,Change the verb form
were
whereas
the indicator for full-time was 10 times lower.In addition
, when it comes to women in
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apply
this
year ,it can be seen that their digit
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digits
was
even half as much in full-time when compared to men. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
However
, to 1990/91 idicators
for both Correct your spelling
indicators
gander
show Correct your spelling
gender
the
similar pattern,which riched the top of 200 Correct article usage
a
thousand
.
Looking more closely, chart
demonstrates that the number of male part-timers had a tendency to decline. In 1990/91 their digit was around 900 Add an article
the chart
thousand
,while
women's interest growth
dramatically. From 700 Replace the word
grew
thousand
in 1970/71
it increased to 1100 Add a comma
71,
thousand
in 1990/91.
Overall
, the chart depicts that involvement in part-time
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the part-time
a part-time
job
was less popular among both genders throughout Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
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the 20-years
20-years
time frameCorrect your spelling
20-year
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