You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved

to the capital city of a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph explains the results of a survey of the mega city of a country in which people shifted
due to
their
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personal reasons.
Overall
, education, adventure and peers were seen following
a
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inclining trend,
while
emloyment
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employment
saw a decrease in
total
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the total
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of adults who shifted to big
city
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cities
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. With regard to
the
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education, starting from early 25k individuals in 2000 and
then
increased and reached
at
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just below 50k in 2005 before rising exponentially to just under 90k in the
year
2015. In terms of jobs, it followed a rising trend,
adults
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with an initial figure of just above 60k in 2000 and
reached at
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just below 90k in the
year
2005. Later, it went through a gradual increase and the eventual figure was 88k in 2015
by
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following a marginal fall.
However
, humans who moved to
mega cities
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in 2000 were exactly half of 20k and
then
it experienced a continuous incline,
finally
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it just hit just above 20k in 2015. Youngsters who moved for adventure in the
year
2000 were nearly 11000,
by
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following a continuous increase, ultimately the number reached
to
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15k in the
year
2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words k, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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