The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph given illustrates the total amount of
goods
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in
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million
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millions
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of
dollars
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and the value of petroleum,
food
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and manufactured
goods
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brought by one nation from 2000 to 2005.
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, there was a reduction in the amount of fuel exported
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a sudden increase, whilst the value of manufactured
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was steady throughout,
food
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and fuel had a fluctuation through the years. During 2000, 300000
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dollars
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was spent on
food
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than a dramatic fall in 2002 to 250000
million
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dollars
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. From 2002, there was a sharp growth to 350000
million
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dollars
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by 2003 and in 2004 had an increase close to 400000
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dollars
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then
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a slight increase to over 400000
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dollars
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in 2005. The value of
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goods
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reflects how petrol performed from 2000 to 2005, with a start
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of
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about 48000
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dollars
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and
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a drastic fall to almost 30000
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dollars
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and 20000
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dollars
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in 2002 and 2005 respectively.
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,
food
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had
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fluctuation
figures starting at almost 20000
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dollars
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then
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a small jump in 2001 to above 20000
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dollars
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,
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in 2003 it plummeted to 20000
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dollars
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. By 2003 it recovered a bit rising to just over 20000 again. Manufacturing came
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as it was flat the same through the years going below 10000
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dollars
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from 2000 to 2005
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, million, dollars, food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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