You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in 

Australian universities over a ten year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 

comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words
The line chart illustrates the data about the
number
of international and domestic student enrollments in Australian Universities over ten years between 2001 and 2010.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the figure of foreign
students
rose more rapidly than the figure of local
students
.
Although
the
number
of local commencing undergraduates fluctuated, the
number
of local
students
was still far exceeding overseas
students
. Looking at the details, 20.000 people started their University in 2001.
Then
the
number
increased gradually, finishing at 80.000.
In contrast
, 400.000 Australian locals were enrolled in University at the start. After, the
number
gradually increased until 2007, when the figure levelled off, finishing at 600.000. As regards commencing
students
, the
number
of outsiders experienced rapid growth by nearly 30.000
students
in 9 years after which, it remained stable at 40.000.
Whereas
, commencing
students
of Australian nations faced a slight fluctuation during the whole period, finishing at just above 200.000 undergraduates.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolments
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • comparative analysis
  • surpassed
  • dominant
  • fluctuations
  • stability
  • growth
  • decline
  • significant
  • notable
  • shift
  • influence
  • predict
  • impact
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