The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the data about the
number
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of international and domestic student enrollments in Australian Universities over ten years between 2001 and 2010.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that the figure of foreign
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rose more rapidly than the figure of local
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.
Although
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the
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of local commencing undergraduates fluctuated, the
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of local
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was still far exceeding overseas
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. Looking at the details, 20.000 people started their University in 2001.
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the
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increased gradually, finishing at 80.000.
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, 400.000 Australian locals were enrolled in University at the start. After, the
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gradually increased until 2007, when the figure levelled off, finishing at 600.000. As regards commencing
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, the
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of outsiders experienced rapid growth by nearly 30.000
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in 9 years after which, it remained stable at 40.000.
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, commencing
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of Australian nations faced a slight fluctuation during the whole period, finishing at just above 200.000 undergraduates.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolments
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • comparative analysis
  • surpassed
  • dominant
  • fluctuations
  • stability
  • growth
  • decline
  • significant
  • notable
  • shift
  • influence
  • predict
  • impact
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