The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
The furnished structural layouts depict the changes which took place in Willington from 1780 to 2000.
From the
overall
anatomization, it can be deduced that the Willington town passes through significant develpoments
over the period with the introduction of new facilities.
Upon initial examination of the chart,it is evident that in1780, Correct your spelling
developments
development
the
hundred houses were constructed in the north-east side, Correct article usage
a
whereas
a two-fold incline was noticed in the ratio of homes in 1860 and the quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
accomdations
reached Correct your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
at
500 till 2000. Change preposition
apply
Further
analysis reveals that the area
of woods were
built to the South direction, Change the verb form
was
however
the woody space had Add a comma
however,
shrinked
in 1860. Probing ahead, the two schools and three sports Correct your spelling
shrunk
field
developed in 2000 to the south.
Analysing the chart in more detail,in the initial years, a big farm Fix the agreement mistake
fields
cultivated
in the middle of the locality, whilst, the Add a missing verb
was cultivated
area
of green farm
decreased in 1860. After 1860. the farm Fix the agreement mistake
farms
area
had vanished. Moving forward, the river was flowing
to the east side of Willington, but in 1860, the new bridge Wrong verb form
flowed
had
Verb problem
was
contructed
. Henceforward, the shops were opened in 2000 Correct your spelling
constructed
along with
river and wetlands area
of birds were grown underneath the river.Submitted by real.nawa on
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