The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
The furnished structural layouts depict the changes which took place in Willington from 1780 to 2000. From the
overall
anatomization, it can be deduced that the Willington town passes through significant
develpoments
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developments
development
over the period with the introduction of new facilities. Upon initial examination of the chart,it is evident that in1780,
the
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hundred houses were constructed in the north-east side,
whereas
a two-fold incline was noticed in the ratio of homes in 1860 and the
quantity
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of
accomdations
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accommodations
accommodation
reached
at
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500 till 2000.
Further
analysis reveals that the
area
of woods
were
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built to the South direction,
however
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the woody space had
shrinked
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in 1860. Probing ahead, the two schools and three sports
field
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fields
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developed in 2000 to the south. Analysing the chart in more detail,in the initial years, a big farm
cultivated
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in the middle of the locality, whilst, the
area
of green
farm
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decreased in 1860. After 1860. the farm
area
had vanished. Moving forward, the river
was flowing
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to the east side of Willington, but in 1860, the new bridge
had
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contructed
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constructed
. Henceforward, the shops were opened in 2000
along with
river and wetlands
area
of birds were grown underneath the river.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • town
  • changes
  • occurred
  • 1780
  • 1860
  • 2000
  • map
  • show
  • named
  • Willington
  • introduction
  • overview
  • comparison
  • conclusion
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