The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar picture depicts information about the total of
Australia
's employees in last
year, which is divided by type of work and by gender.
Correct article usage
the last
To begin
with, it showed that the most common job for women in Australia
last
year was clerical just over 980,000 people, whilst men's top picks fell into tradespeople in 900,000. Moreover
, other popular jobs among ladies are professionals was 700,000 and semi-professionals around 350,000. On the other hand
, the two favourite jobs for males are clerical and professional.
However
, there are several jobs that had fewer likes on ladies, such
as production and tradespeople with the same number of each, which is 100,000 people. Likewise
, managers were not popular among ladies in Australia
. Conversely
, the lowest famous type of work for men is Labourers with just around 250,000, Semi-professionals with approximately 350,000, and lastly
Production was 550,000.
Add a comma
lastly,
To sum up
, the total number of worked persons in Australia
last
year, men always had the highest number in every type of job rather than women.Submitted by anjanadmr on
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