The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following bar diagrams showcase different destinations of
gratuated
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graduate
graduated
students
compared to postgraduated students
after leaving college in 2008. The destinatination of UK graduates in 2008 shows that further's
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further
study
is the most common destination
for both. In the same way, voluntary work
is the least
Correct your spelling
last
destination
.
It can be seen that the quantities of students
are in higher levels for graduated than postgratuaded
. Correct your spelling
postgraduate
For instance
, the Further
study
destination
got a leveled
amount. That range of variation is noticed in part-time, voluntary, Change the spelling
levelled
further
study
and unemployment variables.
In contrast
, the tendency of data doesn't change for both graphs, respectively the destination
are Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
Further
study
, part-time work
, unemployment and voluntary work
. However
, for postgraduated
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postgraduate
post graduated
students
the part-time Add a comma
students,
work
almost leveled
off Change the spelling
levelled
further
Add an article
the further
study
by a difference of 200 students
.
To sum up
, the highest peaks correspond for both study
factors and the lowest peaks which are similar, are depicted for voluntary work
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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