The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The following bar diagrams showcase different destinations of

gratuated

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graduate

graduated

students

compared to postgraduated

students

after leaving college in 2008. The destinatination of UK graduates in 2008 shows that

further's

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further

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study

is the most common

destination

for both. In the same way, voluntary

work

is the

least

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last

show examples

destination

. It can be seen that the quantities of

students

are in higher levels for graduated than

postgratuaded

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postgraduate

For instance

, the

Further

study

destination

got a

leveled

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levelled

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amount. That range of variation is noticed in part-time, voluntary,

further

study

and unemployment variables.

In contrast

, the tendency of data doesn't change for both graphs, respectively the

destination

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destinations

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are

Further

study

, part-time

work

, unemployment and voluntary

work

However

, for

postgraduated

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postgraduate

post graduated

students

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students,

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the part-time

work

almost

leveled

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levelled

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off

further

Add an article

the further

show examples

study

by a difference of 200

students

To sum up

, the highest peaks correspond for both

study

factors and the lowest peaks which are similar, are depicted for voluntary

work

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

152 words

6.50

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Single idea per paragraph

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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people think that older employees contribute most to the success of a company. Others think that younger people play a more vital role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to the new buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important are old buildings?

People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?