Science tells us that some activities are good for our health, while some others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people all over the world continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is the case and what might be done to change this?

Nowadays, there is an increasing trend in unhealthy habits

likewise

unhealthy diet cycle. In my opinion,

this

is because people do not have enough

knowledge

about healthy lifestyles;

therefore

, the government and other organizations play a pivotal role in educating society. One of the main reasons for

this

phenomenon is they have little

knowledge

and awareness about their body states and how to maintain

it

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them

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.

Moreover

, it

worsen

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is worsened

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by fast food companies,

for instance

, as they always publish engaging advertisements and

branding

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brand

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themselves as a diet alternative.

However

, the majority of individuals

confuse

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are confused

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about what they

allow

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are allowed

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to eat.

In addition

, if one

want

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wants

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to run a positive

lifestyles

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lifestyle

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, they will spend lots of money to buy healthier goods and to purchase gym

class

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classes

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per month.

For example

, real foods are more expensive than ultra-process foods

likewise

nuggets.

Thus

, those aspects

are hindering

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hinder

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an individual

to have

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from having

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good habits.

However

, the solution for

this

is the government should establish a campaign to increase awareness to maintain their health. The best way to illustrate

this

is Indonesia has socialization programs to educate citizens about the decent amount of daily

nutritions

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nutrition

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and vitamins; afterwards, people

understood

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understand

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how

many

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much

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sugar they can consume.

Secondly

, foundations and NGOs can

held

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hold

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sport

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sports

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events to enhance individuals' interest in exercising.

Hence

, if they gained the

knowledge

and the facilitation to do

this

healthy lifestyle, they would have no

reasons

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reason

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avoiding

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to avoid

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this

again. In conclusion,

although

there are several obstacles in

this

trends

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trend

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such

as financial aspects and lack of

knowledge

, the

stake holders

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stakeholders

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can assist to enrich the quality of one's life.