The charts below show thge percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show thge percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Water
is considered
as
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the most essential resource supporting the daily needs of all living creatures around the globe. By humans, it is mostly utilised for three main sectors as portrayed in the charts above. These diagrams show how
water
is spent
in
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six different continents for industrial, agricultural, and domestic use. One apparent
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from these charts is that for most continents involved here, agriculture is the estuary
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where the
water
is spent the most. It is shown by the blue colours that dominate South America, Africa, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
. The gap is extremely huge since the other two sectors do not exceed 30% altogether. It is even bigger in Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
that the amount of
water
used for plantation and fieldwork reaches more than 80%.
In contrast
, it is
such
an exception for the two developed continents: North America and Europe. In these two areas,
water
is spent mostly for industrial purposes, followed by agriculture and
then
domestic purposes. All in all, the amount of
this
clear liquid spent by these six territories
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. It is no wonder since each place has distinct geographical characteristics and
therefore
priorities.
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