The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the coment-making process, and how coment is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the coment-making process, and how coment is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram shows the preparation of two main products of construction
including
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Cement
and Concrete Production, with enumeration of all the necessary equipment.
Overall
, as it is depicted, the creation of
cement
starts with Crushing limestone and clay,
meanwhile
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the process of concrete production commences with mixing
cement
and other elements.
Firstly
as it was mentioned limestone and clay are crushed by crusher,
subsequently
the powder
that is
made from that process goes to the mixer to be blended. Afterwards, the substance is
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entered
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the rotating heater where it is
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circulated and heated at the same time.
Finally
, the taken material is
grounded
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by a grinder,
therefore
cement
is ready to be put into the bags.
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the second illustration, it can be noticed that to create the concrete, 15% of
Cement
must be added alongside 10% of water, 25% of sand
as well as
50% of gravel to the concrete mixer where the substance is swirling. After mixing all the items together,
as a
result
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the concrete is made.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • raw materials
  • grinding
  • heating process
  • kilns
  • clinker
  • gypsum
  • machinery
  • crushers
  • grinders
  • rotary kilns
  • ball mills
  • sand
  • gravel
  • versatility
  • civil engineering
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