The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the coment-making process, and how coment is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram shows the preparation of two main products of construction
including
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apply
Cement
and Concrete Production, with enumeration of all the necessary equipment.
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Overall
, as it is depicted, the creation of Linking Words
cement
starts with Crushing limestone and clay, Use synonyms
meanwhile
the process of concrete production commences with mixing Add a comma
meanwhile,
cement
and other elements.
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Firstly
as it was mentioned limestone and clay are crushed by crusher, Linking Words
subsequently
the powder Linking Words
that is
made from that process goes to the mixer to be blended. Afterwards, the substance is Linking Words
being
entered Unnecessary verb
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to
the rotating heater where it is Change preposition
into
being
circulated and heated at the same time. Unnecessary verb
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Finally
, the taken material is Linking Words
grounded
by a grinder, Verb problem
ground
therefore
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cement
is ready to be put into the bags.
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By
the second illustration, it can be noticed that to create the concrete, 15% of Change preposition
In
Cement
must be added alongside 10% of water, 25% of sand Use synonyms
as well as
50% of gravel to the concrete mixer where the substance is swirling. After mixing all the items together, Linking Words
as a
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result
the concrete is made.Add a comma
result,
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