The charts below show thge percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show thge percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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pie charts illustrate the proportion of using
water
in 6 different areas for three various purposes.
Overall
, it can be seen that in South
America
, Africa, South East
Asia
, and Central
Asia
the highest ratio of
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water
belonged to Agriculture,
while
in Europe and North
America
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the highest usage accounted for the Industrial part. In detail, in four different parts namely, Central
Asia
, Africa, South East
Asia
, and South
America
Agriculture provided the highest percentage of
water
usage at 88%, 84%, 81%, and 71 per cent respectively.
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the Industrial sector used 53% and 48% of the whole
water
in Europe and North
America
,
whereas
in the other four parts it used between 5% and 12%.
Furthermore
, a small portion of
water
consumption
belogned
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belonged
to the Domestic sector. Generally,
water
was consumed in Central
Asia
and South East the same at 7%,
while
the highest ratio was dedicated to South
Asia
.
This
is followed
further
by Europe at 15%,
and
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North
America
at 13% and Africa at 9 per cent.
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