The charts below show thge percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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pie charts illustrate the proportion of using

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in 6 different areas for three various purposes.

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, it can be seen that in South

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, Africa, South East

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, and Central

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the highest ratio of

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water

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belonged to Agriculture,

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in Europe and North

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the highest usage accounted for the Industrial part. In detail, in four different parts namely, Central

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, Africa, South East

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, and South

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Agriculture provided the highest percentage of

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usage at 88%, 84%, 81%, and 71 per cent respectively.

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the Industrial sector used 53% and 48% of the whole

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in Europe and North

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in the other four parts it used between 5% and 12%.

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, a small portion of

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consumption

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to the Domestic sector. Generally,

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was consumed in Central

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and South East the same at 7%,

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the highest ratio was dedicated to South

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by Europe at 15%,

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North

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at 13% and Africa at 9 per cent.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, asia with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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