You recently attented a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home you found you had left some vital papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager or the hotel. -Explain the problem. -Say why the documents are vital . - Suggest a solution.

Dear
sir
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or Madam I am writing to you to explain
this
letter that
last
week. I
had
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have
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been
lived
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living
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in your
hotel
. But that place is
I
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face
to
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one problem
what
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is why I going to
said
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say
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that issue.
On time
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I
had
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left some vital documents at the
hotel
that it is blue paper so it
has
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had
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a fiveteen
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fiveteen
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fifteen
list.
Last
day I recently
attented
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attended
a meeting at a
hotel
then
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when I returned home, and as far as I am
conserned
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concerned
that it had left. Again I can say that it
is essentially documents
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is essentially documented
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for me since next month, I will meeting a new person so I must
giving
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give
be giving
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to it. Two days ago, she
was give
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me it and with many tasks. It is paper need to for a new
busness
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business
. I hope that the documents
is
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are
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preserving
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preserved
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in your
hotel
.
Also
please
from
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you that
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please check your
hotel
especially
I
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since I
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had
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have
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been
lived
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living
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in my room I reckon that you can do a solution during the next day. Yours
fathfully
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faithfully
, Sadinova Feruza
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Tone and Structure
Begin the letter with a proper address to the addressee. Although 'Dear Sir or Madam' is appropriate, make sure the rest of your letter maintains a polite and formal tone.
Introduction and Purpose
Clearly introduce the purpose of your letter in the first paragraph. Use concise language to explain that you left important documents at the hotel and require assistance.
Paragraph Structure
To improve coherence, organize your letter into paragraphs, each addressing a specific point: explaining the issue, detailing why the documents are vital, and suggesting a solution.
Idea Flow and Transitions
For cohesion, ensure your ideas flow logically from one to the next. Use transitional phrases and maintain a focused narrative throughout the letter.
Problem Explanation and Solution Suggestion
To enhance task achievement, clearly explain why the documents are crucial for your upcoming meeting and directly suggest a practical solution, like asking the hotel to safely mail the documents to you.
Grammar and Accuracy
Pay attention to grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Review the use of past and present tenses, and ensure proper sentence structure for clarity.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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