The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates the average monthly change in the price of three
metals
which are Cooper, Use synonyms
Nickel
and Use synonyms
Zinc
back to 2014.
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Overall
, Linking Words
Nickel
saw a dramatic fall during Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
year
, Use synonyms
while
, Cooper and Linking Words
Zinc
maintained almost the same level. In the first half of the Use synonyms
year
, all of the Use synonyms
metals
saw a Use synonyms
decrease
, Use synonyms
whereas
, in the other half of the Linking Words
year
they rose significantly.
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According to
the graph, in the first three Linking Words
month
of 2014, Change to a plural noun
months
Nickel
fell dramatically from 6 Use synonyms
percent
to 1 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, Linking Words
Zinc
saw both Use synonyms
a
increase and Change the article
an
Use synonyms
decrease
respectively. In summer, all three Correct article usage
a decrease
metals
saw a remarkable Use synonyms
decrease
, Use synonyms
while
, the most Linking Words
amont
of reduction was Correct your spelling
amount
fot
Correct your spelling
for
Nickel
withUse synonyms
4
Correct article usage
a 4
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
decrease
. Use synonyms
In addition
, during Linking Words
may
and Capitalize the word
May
june
, Change the capitalization
June
Nickel
and Use synonyms
Zinc
fell but Copper remained the same Use synonyms
amont
.
All the Correct your spelling
amount
metals
saw an increase one Use synonyms
year
after summer. Use synonyms
However
, during Linking Words
fall
each of the Correct article usage
the fall
metals
remained Use synonyms
the
same level, Change preposition
at the
while
they decreased slightly one month later. Linking Words
Additonally
, during the winter all of the Correct your spelling
Additionally
metals
rose Use synonyms
noticaably
.Correct your spelling
noticeably
noticeable
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Vocabulary: Replace the words metals, nickel, zinc, year, decrease with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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