The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The column chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females in diverse age groups who did exercise on a regular basis in the year 2010.
Overall
, in the age category of 25-64 years old, Linking Words
women
were more active than Use synonyms
men
in 2010, Use synonyms
whereas
, in the 15 to 24-year-old group, the level of physical activity among Linking Words
men
was higher than that of Use synonyms
women
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, doing exercise was equally popular among elderly males and females in Australia.
In 2010, the percentage of 15 to 24-year-old Linking Words
men
who exercised regularly stood at 52.8%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the figures for Australian Linking Words
women
who were physically active in the 25 to 34, 35 to 44, and 45 to 54 age groups were higher at 48.9, 52.5, and 53.3, respectively. It can be implied that the least level of activity related to Use synonyms
men
in the 35 to 44 year-old group with 39.5%. Use synonyms
Finally
, it is worth mentioning that the percentage of doing exercise among 65-year-old Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
and over was equal to nearly 47%.Use synonyms
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