The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the trends of 4 Brighton attractions that tourists travelled from 1980 to 2010. As a general

trend

,

it is clear that

the Festival had the highest proportions in 1980,

while

the

Pavilion

had the most in 2010. Looking more closely at the data, in 1980,the

Pavilion

had 25%

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,but

following

this

,there was a high rocket to a peak of almost 50% in 1995.

However

,in 2000,the tourists of

Pavilion

declined sharply to 35% in 2000.

Finally

,there was

then

a slight decrease to 30% in 2010. Showing a completely different

trend

,the number of visitors

from

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the Art Gallery was

22

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the

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1980,before a dramatic fluctuation to 20 % between 1980 and 1995.

After

this

, there was a minimal climb to 22% in 1995,and from

then

on,there was a gradual drop to 8% in 2010.

On the other hand

,the tourism of the Festival was a steady

trend

in

this

time period,in 1980,the percentage was 30%

while

it had 27

%in

2010. Showing a similar

trend

,the pier had 10

%in

1980,there was

then

a gradual fluctuation between 1980 and 2000.

However

,the

trend

rose sharply to 22

%in

2010. In sum,

although

the festival was the most popular attraction in 1980,the

Pavilion

was higher than in 2010.