ou have arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain the important event • apologise for the situation • suggest a new arrangement
Dear John,
I wanted to tell you that
unfortunately
I can’t go to see you in England because we are celebrating an important event at our house. my brother is getting married. and Add a comma
unfortunately,
this
is one of the very important events in his life, and for
this
reason
I must be in a place with him and must help with the affairs of organizing the wedding, ordering a cake, preparing the house for the wedding, Add a comma
reason,
ordering
cars for the newlyweds. and since my brother is very busy with his affairs and he is very excited and cannot concentrate on one thing, I have to do a lot in his place and help him
And I really wish I could go to the time we agreed upon. I am sorry. At Correct word choice
and ordering
such
an important moment, I have to be with my family
But if you want, I can go
to you at another time, if you tell me when you have vacation or free time. How about next monthVerb problem
come
.
I just have a vacation from work next month and I would gladly go to meet you. my vacation starts on the 12th of next month and if you agree, I can be in England as early as the 13th at night.
I hope you accept my apologies, thanks for understanding
Change the punctuation
?
Your
sincerely,
Jasur.Correct the word
Yours
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Task Achievement
To improve task achievement, ensure you provide a clear and concise explanation of the important event, offer a heartfelt apology for the inconvenience caused, and suggest a detailed and practical new arrangement. Remember to directly address all three bullet points provided in the task.
Coherence & Cohesion
When working on coherence and cohesion, try to start each paragraph with a clear topic sentence, followed by supporting details and a concluding sentence. Keep your ideas clearly divided between paragraphs.
Logical Structure
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Greeting & Closing
Make your letter more engaging and reader-friendly by enhancing greeting and closing statements. This includes using varied language and a slightly more formal tone, fitting the letter's context.
Single Idea Per Paragraph
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