68.The charts below show the average temperatures in 12 months in three cities and how many hours of sunshine these cities have in a year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

68.The charts below show the average temperatures in 12 months in three cities and how many hours of sunshine these cities have in a year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given chart elucidates the occasionally observed temperature of three cities for
an
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year.
In
addition
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addition,
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they noted the presence of sunrays within
hours
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the hours
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time limit.
Following
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The following
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changes were noticed over two decades from 1949 to 2009. The pivotal point of the chart is the most extreme changes were
noticable
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noticeable
in 1950, 1974, 1999 and 2000 as warm,
while
the years 1971, 1985,
1989
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and 1989
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were relatively colder. On the other side, the unmentioned years just fluctuated or maintained pace or normality. The month of January, started
of
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as
warm
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a warm
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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