68.The charts below show the average temperatures in 12 months in three cities and how many hours of sunshine these cities have in a year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given chart elucidates the occasionally observed temperature of three cities for
an
year. Change the article
a
In
addition
they noted the presence of sunrays within Add a comma
addition,
hours
time limit. Add an article
the hours
an hours
Following
changes were noticed over two decades from 1949 to 2009.
The pivotal point of the chart is the most extreme changes were Correct article usage
The following
noticable
in 1950, 1974, 1999 and 2000 as warm, Correct your spelling
noticeable
while
the years 1971, 1985, 1989
were relatively colder. On the other side, the unmentioned years just fluctuated or maintained pace or normality.
The month of January, started Correct word choice
and 1989
of
as Replace the word
off
warm
Correct article usage
a warm
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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