the diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricit. summaries the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the given drawing gives an idea of how electrical power is generated with

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of

water

flow. looking from an

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perspective, the entire method of generating power supplies contains seven different steps. beginning with the

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of the Sun and ending with the generation of electrical supplies for Hospitals and Schools. in the first step, seawater absorbs hot sun rays

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the

water

vapor

convert

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into clouds and they downpour as rain into

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the valve

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located at the bottom of the dam is open which

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a

water

flow

presure cusing

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pressure causing

the turbine

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producing high

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voltage

electricity power and at the same time the residual

water

return to the

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reservoir

through

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by the force pumped in order to recycle the

water

again and

further

use.

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, generated electricity is transferred by high Voltage cable on big towers to transformer stations. in

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step, underground cables distribute

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energy to different areas,

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as hospitals, schools, houses and factories. in short, it is a long and expensive process because lots of resources are required.