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The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at leat 150 words.

The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at leat 150 words.
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The bar chart depicts the information about the annual
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GDP
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growth
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 per year in three different countries (
Tunisia
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,
Japan
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, and
Ecuador
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) from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
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,
while
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 the percentage of GPD
growth
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 in
Tunisia
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slighly
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slightly
 decreased, in
Japan
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slighly
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slightly
 decreased.
On the other hand
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,
GDP
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growth
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 in
Ecuador
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 was fluctuation.
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 highest
number of
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GDP
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growth
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 in 2007 was
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Tunisia
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in Tunisia
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 but in 2010 changed
into
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Japan
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. In 2007,
Tunisia
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 started over 6%
GDP
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growth
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anually
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annually
 which is the highest
growth
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. There are
noticable
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noticeable
increased
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 in the
folowing
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following
 years, in 2008 the
GDP
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growth
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 was under 5%, in 2009 and in 2010 was around 3%. Different with the
GDP
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growth
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 of
Japan
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 which started as the least with
percentage
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the percentage
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 of
growth
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 in 2007 around 2%, but
constansly
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constantly
 increased in the
folowing
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following
 years.
Ecuador
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 started around 3%
GDP
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growth
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 in 2007,
then
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slighly
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slightly
 rose in 2008 (under 5%) and became the highest
GDP
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growth
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 in 2008. There was
extreme
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an extreme
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 decrease in 2019 and
increase
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an increase
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 in 2010.
if
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the highest
GDP
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growth
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 for
entire
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the entire
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 period was
Japan
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 in 2010 but the lowest was
Ecuador
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 in 2009.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, growth, tunisia, japan, ecuador with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 12 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP growth rate
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peaks and troughs
  • economic performance
  • comparative analysis
  • stability
  • volatility
  • economic crisis
  • policy changes
  • annual growth
  • main features
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