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The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at leat 150 words.

The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at leat 150 words.
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The bar chart depicts the information about the annual
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GDP
growth
 per year in three different countries (
Tunisia
,
Japan
, and
Ecuador
) from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
,
while
 the percentage of GPD
growth
 in
Tunisia
slighly
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slightly
 decreased, in
Japan
slighly
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slightly
 decreased.
On the other hand
,
GDP
growth
 in
Ecuador
 was fluctuation.
If the
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 highest
number of
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GDP
growth
 in 2007 was
Tunisia
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in Tunisia
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 but in 2010 changed
into
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to
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Japan
. In 2007,
Tunisia
 started over 6%
GDP
growth
anually
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annually
 which is the highest
growth
. There are
noticable
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noticeable
increased
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 in the
folowing
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following
 years, in 2008 the
GDP
growth
 was under 5%, in 2009 and in 2010 was around 3%. Different with the
GDP
growth
 of
Japan
 which started as the least with
percentage
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the percentage
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 of
growth
 in 2007 around 2%, but
constansly
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constantly
 increased in the
folowing
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following
 years.
Ecuador
 started around 3%
GDP
growth
 in 2007,
then
slighly
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slightly
 rose in 2008 (under 5%) and became the highest
GDP
growth
 in 2008. There was
extreme
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an extreme
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 decrease in 2019 and
increase
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an increase
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 in 2010.
if
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the highest
GDP
growth
 for
entire
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the entire
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 period was
Japan
 in 2010 but the lowest was
Ecuador
 in 2009.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, growth, tunisia, japan, ecuador with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 12 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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