Some people today believe that the world’s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase in necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

There are some people who argue that an increase in the

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of populations is not sustainable and will

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result in a global crisis,

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the opponents of

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view claim that it is essential for fostering

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and society of the world. I believe that

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overpopulation can solve the problem of the lack of workforce, a growing

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threatens the future in terms of the lack of essential living supplies. On the one hand, it seems to me that, an unsustainable increasing

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of people puts the future of the world at risk. It can lead to a worldwide crisis throughout the world, especially in undeveloped

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.

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, five years ago, citizens of Sahaba, one of the poor

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, faced

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terrible overpopulation, and it caused

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reduction

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living demands,

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as water, food, and energy.

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that time, a significant increase in the

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of death rates was recorded in Sahaba.

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, a growing

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can bring necessary benefits to

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where birth rates are lower. It is important for building

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healthier economic system and society network. It can lead to growing demand for goods, allowing economies to expand and increasing the skilled workforce. Take Serbia

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growth in Serbia, there can be seen a rise in the

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of talented workers in the workplace. In conclusion,

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overpopulation can deal with the issue of

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labor

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force in

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the population

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is not higher on a substantial scale, I believe that a growing

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of people will ultimately culminate in a global catastrophe,

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as the shortage of natural needs, including food, water, and energy.