The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.
The line graph summarizes the data about the changes in the
birth
and death
rates
in New Zealand over a 200-year period from 1901 to 2101.
Overall
, what is worth mentioning is the constant rise in the number of demises that started in the year of
2001. Change preposition
apply
While
the death
percentage is forecast to increase, birth
rates
are expected to change in a reversed direction till the end of the given time frame.
To start with, both death
and birth
indicators demonstrated growth in the first half of the given period. Though the changes consisted mostly of moderate ups and downs for the death
estimates, the birth
estimates showed rapid changes in most of the years. The birth
rates
reached the
peak in 1961, increasing by an approximate percentage of 45%. Change the word
their
Death
rates
, on the other hand
, had risen by almost 20% by the end of 2001.
From 2001 onward, death
percentage showed Correct article usage
the death
extreme
increase which is believed to be going up, even with faster speed. Correct article usage
an extreme
According to
estimations, the death
numbers are expected to hit its biggest change and reach 60% by 2061.On the contrary
, birth
rates
are forecast to go down gradually and stay right above 40% at the end
of 2101.Submitted by writingbhos on
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