The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts information about employees by gender and kind of jobs, in
last
year, in Australia. There are seven categories divided by 2 sex: male and female.
Overall
, there are more
men
than
women
in all sectors of jobs, except clerical. The most common job for
men
is tradespeople,
whereas
for
women
is clerical. Professional jobs are the group where the difference by sex is lower,
while
the cluster where the difference is higher, is tradespeople. There are far more
men
in management and production roles. Despite in the clerical sector
women
are the majority, almost 1 million, the number of employed people in
this
sector is the second most often among
men
(900,000). The categories where
men
are less frequent are labourers (400.00) and semi-professionals (500.000). Among
women
, tradespeople (100,00) and production (100,00) presented the same amount and both sectors are the least common.
Overall
, there are more male people working than female people, in absolute numbers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment figures
  • Sectors
  • Significant disparities
  • Gender balance
  • Skewed
  • Trends
  • Patterns
  • Dominant
  • Inferred
  • Labor market
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Insights
  • Implications
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