The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. _ Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage

of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years

2002 and 2010.

_

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented charts illustrate the proportion of owning
computers
throughout an eight-year period, starting from 2002 and different educational levels of having one in 2002 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that computer ownership witnessed an increasing trend over the given time frame.
Additionally
, postgraduated people had the highest portion of ownership,
while
the ones who
had
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did
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not a high school diploma owned
computers
less than others. In detail, in 2002, 55 per cent of the total population had
computers
.
Moreover
, in 2004 and 2006 generally, almost two-thirds of individuals owned
computers
.
Furthermore
, by 2010, having a computer reached a peak at 80% of the total population. In terms of educational level, only 18%
people
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of people
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who did not have a high school diploma had PC,
while
in the following eight years it went up to about 40%.
In addition
,
this
number was around 40% and 70% for high school
graduated
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graduates
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in 2002 and 2010 respectively.
Whereas
, around half of college students owned one in 2002
this
number rose to 85% in 2010.
Moreover
, the ones who had bachelor's degrees and
postgraduated
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postgraduate
consisted of the highest ratio at 70% and 90% in 2002 and 75% and 95 per cent in 2010.
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