Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem
Dear Mr./Madam
I am writing to concern with my problem. It was
last
week when I returned form
my business trip from Moscow to Erevan . It was Correct your spelling
from
number
124 plane at evening 11:45 PM When I Correct article usage
the number
went
out Verb problem
got
from
Change preposition
of
airport
I Correct article usage
the airport
relized
that Correct your spelling
realized
realised
i
Change the capitalization
I
forgot
my Verb problem
had left
bag
in
my plane.
I would like to describe my Change preposition
on
bag
it is a plack , smoll size
Correct your spelling
small-size
bag
, on its two sides are the red lines, It hase
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has
Correct article usage
a metalic
metalic
zip . That Correct your spelling
metallic
beg
for my more Change the verb form
begs
importante
because it gave me my friend for my birthday and it Correct your spelling
important
is
for me more expensive. In Wrong verb form
was
edditional
, there a different Correct your spelling
addition
kinde
of documents in my Correct your spelling
kinds
bag
.
I would like to do everything to fine
my Correct your spelling
find
bag
and return to
me. If you can not find it I will write my insurance and I will open Correct pronoun usage
it to
clame
. I think when you one more time investigate Correct your spelling
flame
this
process you will find my bag
.
I want to informe
you that I will wait you Correct your spelling
inform
jast
five days and Correct your spelling
just
then
I will write my inshuranse
for of Correct your spelling
insurance
clame
.
I am looking forward to hearing Correct your spelling
claim
you
Correct pronoun usage
your
answere
.
Yours faithfully
Zohrab GevorgyanCorrect your spelling
answer
answered
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Task Achievement
To improve your complete response score, ensure you address all parts of the prompt more explicitly. Start by clearly stating that you were on a flight to London, not just mentioning the flight numbers and cities. Then, more clearly articulate what you want the airline to do besides investigating - do you wish for compensation, a direct return if found, or any specific action?
Coherence and Cohesion
For a better score on coherence and cohesion, focus on organizing your information more logically. Introduce the situation in the first paragraph, describe the bag in a detailed but concise manner in the second paragraph, and in the third, outline your expectations clearly. Use connectors to guide the reader through your narrative more smoothly.
Coherence and Cohesion
Improve your logical structure by creating clear, distinct sections in your letter for explaining the situation, describing the bag and its contents, and stating your desired action from the airline. This will help the reader follow your points more easily.
Coherence and Cohesion
To enhance the greeting and closing of your letter, use 'Dear Sir or Madam' when you're unsure of the recipient's gender, and ensure the closing is appropriately formal, such as 'Yours sincerely' when you don't know the name of the person you are writing to.