The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the use of home in
internet
by reasons and age groups in Australia.
Overall
, emailing has the highest number of internet
users
, followed by paying bills online and social networking. Furthermore
, social networks are mostly used by younger people
, when in fact, online banking and emailing are relatively utilised by all ages.
To begin
with, social networking has around 60% of internet
users
. Subsequently
, there are more than 60% of internet
users
paying bills online or using online banking. In addition
to this
, online mail become the most used by nearly 100%.
People
aged 15-24 stand as the highest social networking users
, with a rate of approximately 90%, whereas
people
aged 65 or older reach only one-fifth of its users
. Next,
paying bills online or online banking has people
aged 25-34 as the main users
, while
the rates of other age groups are rather similar. Equally, emailing attracts all
Correct determiner usage
apply
people
throughout
different ages, with a rate of 80%.Change preposition
of
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