The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the use of home in
internet
by reasons and age groups in Australia.
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Overall
, emailing has the highest number of Linking Words
internet
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users
, followed by paying bills online and social networking. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, social networks are mostly used by younger Linking Words
people
, when in fact, online banking and emailing are relatively utilised by all ages.
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To begin
with, social networking has around 60% of Linking Words
internet
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users
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Subsequently
, there are more than 60% of Linking Words
internet
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users
paying bills online or using online banking. Use synonyms
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, online mail become the most used by nearly 100%.
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People
aged 15-24 stand as the highest social networking Use synonyms
users
, with a rate of approximately 90%, Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
people
aged 65 or older reach only one-fifth of its Use synonyms
users
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Next,
paying bills online or online banking has Linking Words
people
aged 25-34 as the main Use synonyms
users
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while
the rates of other age groups are rather similar. Equally, emailing attracts Linking Words
all
Correct determiner usage
apply
people
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throughout
different ages, with a rate of 80%.Change preposition
of
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