The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart draws the conclusion from a survey of the amount of the British donated to charity by age range in both years 1990 and 2010.
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around fifty years old, they were extremely kind and generous. Even they helped to another more.
However
, the number of them a gentle decline in 2010. In the chart, the age of people is divided into five groups from 18 years old to above 65. In 1990, it seems to be the rate of 36-50 that helped to the poverty.
However
, when they get older, the figures show that their number significantly decreases. In 2010, the trend was similar to two decades ago,
Nevertheless
, the tendency happened to have reached a peak in the first period of their life until 65, before it fell suddenly. There was the majority portion between 51and 65 approximately 40 per cent.
On the contrary
, the previous data shows that people helped the poor above 40% from 36 to 50.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charitable donations
  • age range/bracket/group
  • percentage (%)
  • 20-year period
  • British people
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • significant change
  • donation patterns
  • remained stable
  • highest/lowest
  • observe
  • compare
  • summarize
  • comment on
  • relevant features
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