WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you are selling • describe the furniture • suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...............,
Dear Rohit,
I hope you are doing well, As you know I am going to relocate from Delhi to Mumbai on 5 April 2024
hence
, I want to inform you that I selling my furniture and
before I tell to someone else I thought to inform you first if you are Correct word choice
apply
intrested
to take anything.
Correct your spelling
interested
Although
,
You have visited many times at my place but once again I wanted to describe pertaining to my stuff, so I have Remove the comma
apply
such
as,
1 Double bed king size,1 Remove the comma
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Dinning
table with 6 chairs and Correct your spelling
Dining
sofa
set, those are in good condition as you have seen recently.
Correct article usage
a sofa
Hence
, If you have any plan
to see the furniture and want to choose based on your Fix the agreement mistake
plans
requirement
, kindly let me know , I will be Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
avalaible
at home on upcoming weekends Correct your spelling
available
in
between 15 Mar to 31 Mar 2024.
I look forward to your reply as much as Change preposition
apply
posible
.
Thanks.Correct your spelling
possible
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Task Achievement
Your letter effectively addresses all parts of the task, indicating a good understanding of the requirements. However, make sure every section of your letter contributes directly to the task. For example, when describing the furniture, provide more detail to help the reader visualize the items better.
Coherence & Cohesion
The structure of your letter is fairly logical, with a clear progression of ideas. To improve, consider using a wider range of linking devices to better connect your ideas and paragraphs. This would enhance the overall flow and coherence of your letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and contribute to a suitable writing tone for the context. To enhance your tone further, pay attention to maintaining a consistent level of formality throughout the letter.
General
To further improve your writing, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and the range of vocabulary. Avoid repetitive expressions and aim for precision in language use, which will enhance the clarity and impact of your message.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,