20.The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words. 20.The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates information about
process
of Add an article
the process
milk
production manufacturing.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it requires six steps to produce some kind of Linking Words
milk
Use synonyms
products
. We can see that Fix the agreement mistake
product
process
starts in the grazing and finishes in shops and supermarkets.
Correct article usage
the process
At the first
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stage
cows are grazed for giving Add a comma
stage,
milk
twice a day. Use synonyms
Next,
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this
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milk
Use synonyms
moved
into Add a missing verb
is moved
refrigeration
Correct article usage
a refrigeration
storag
and is Correct your spelling
storage
dalivered
to Dairy by Correct your spelling
delivered
Use synonyms
milk
tanker daily.
In the Correct article usage
a milk
Dairy
Add a comma
Dairy,
rhe
Correct your spelling
the
milk
goes through several treatments and pasteurizing and Use synonyms
packeging
Correct your spelling
packaging
for obtaining
cheese, cream, butter and bottles of Change preposition
to obtain
milk
. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
this
production is ready to purchase in supermarkets and shops.Linking Words
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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